Edited script

HAHA hello people! I edited some part of the script (mainly my part).

The new script (just take note):

Scene 1 Part 1
Sure-win: Are you confident you can do this?
Tommy: (Nods head with serious and solemn expression) Mmhmm.
Sure-win: But make sure no one learns about this.
Tommy: 'course
Sure-win: (Passes money to Tommy, Tommy peers into envelope) Do your job and the rest of the money is yours.
-Sure-win walks out first, then Tommy in the opposite direction-

Scene 1 Part 2
Coach Guo Da: (appears enthusiastic): All right guys, we can do this! The match is tomorrow and if we win this World Cup… (looks very happy) Just imagine how many fans will come and get your autographs and how bright your futures will be if we win this World Cup, our country’s first trophy in ever since President Mao founded the Republic of China. (looks hopeful, in own thoughts)
Player 1: (looks impossible) But... But...
Coach Guo Da: (back to reality) Come on, don't doubt yourselves!
Player 2: Doubt...?? *Puzzled expression*
Coach Guo Da: Err... It means... You all are good!
Player 3: For the country, we can do this!!
-Cheering from everyone-
All: GO CHINA!!!

Scene 1 Part 3
(Coach Guo Da and Qiu Da in the middle of the stage)
Coach Guo Da: Qiu Da, we are depending on you for tomorrow’s match. Don't let us down.
Qiu Da: Rest assured, coach.
Coach Guo Da: Have a good rest.
-Coach Guo Da leaves stage, spotlight on Qiu Da-
Qiu Da: Surely we can't lose to the English dogs! We will definitely win, win, win! I'm going to be the best player in the world! Every sports brand would want me as their model. I'm going to be the most famous person in the world!

Scene 1 Part 4
Sure-win: As all of you know, England will be competing against China in the World Cup finals tomorrow.
Luther: Brilliant! I am going to place my bet on England later.
Gondler: Can't the China team see how strong the England team is and how lousy they are?
Sexy Lucy: (to Luther) Darling, do you want me to open some beer cans for your friends?
Luther: Excellent! Bring the beer cans out!
Sure-win: For your information, the China team has a strong football player called Qiu Da, but the problem is solved.

Scene 2 Part 1: Football Field
(Referee Tommy monitoring teams at practice before the BIG GAME)
Tommy walking, deep in thought, about James’ bribe. Tommy stares intently at the paper, then puts it in his back pocket. Brad Pitt bumps into him and the piece of paper drops on the ground.

Tommy: Aiya! You filthy man, watch where you're going! (Scowls)
Brad: Sorry, sorry (mumbling apologies)

Tommy walks off. Brad Pitt notices the piece of paper. He picks it up quickly, tries to call Tommy to come back but Tommy was already gone.

Brad: Hmm...? What is this?

Brad reads out paper: Five thousand euros. Do not let HIM score. Meet at 11:45. Usual place.
Brad raises his eyebrows.

Scene 2 Part 2: At the end of the match
Commentator Lee: At this crucial last 2 minutes of the game, the score is one-nil, with England in the lead! Qiu Da is dribbling the ball past the English defenders number 3 and 4! Will he be able to change history in this last 2 minutes? He swerves and shoots! And... Qiu Da SCORES!!!

Chinese supporters cheer.
British supporters wail.

Scene 3 Part 1
Referee Tommy (roars and blows whistle): Offside!
(Crowd jeers)
(Qiu Da Furious and pushes the people beside him roughly)
(Brad Pitt has a look of realization on his face)
(English-supporting gamblers cheer while chinese-supporting gamblers wail bitterly)
Sure-win James smiles bitterly and begins a monologue:
A long long time ago (dramatic pause)
While I was in China with my mother,
As the days passed, she grew paler and weaker, paler and weaker (softer)
One night, while I was in bed,
I heard some choking sounds and rushed to her bed. (dramatic pause)
Shocked and worried, I rushed her to the nearest clinic
Where an old physician and his only son lived
I begged him to treat my mother to his best
He agreed and promised, “I will try my best”.
The physician turned to his young son, Qiu Da, and told him, “Qiu Da, go to bed.”
But in the end, it turned out all wrong (very wrong)
The next morning, I visited my mother,
Only to find her blank, lifeless eyes staring at me
And at that moment, something in me snapped
“What happened?” I asked the doctor in a grim tone
The doctor pointed at a few empty tablet bottles and shook his head
The young son appeared again and this time I stared at him with accusatory eyes
“You will pay for this.” I said before walking off.

(End of Monologue)

Scene 3 Part 2
Qiu Da: (Tried to bash Brad Pitt up)
Brad Pitt (holds him back): NO, no… wait… I saw this piece of paper…
Qiu Da: (thrusting about in his hold)
Brad Pitt: It said something about not allowing you to score…
Qiu Da: (pause with a shocked expression): W..h..a…t???
Brad Pitt: Seems like someone is after you…
Qiu Da (pissed off and storms off)
Brad Pitt (sighs)

Meanwhile…
Deborah Cocker Spaniel and Sexy Lucy are out to buy Heineken beer for the gamblers in celebration of British’s win.

Scene 4 Part 1
Sexy Lucy: Hey, do you think James went a bit too far this time?
Deborah: That wretched Qiu Da deserves it! (admires her nails)
Sexy Lucy (flicks her hair to one side): Oh well… hey look that’s a lovely diamond-encrusted silver glittering purse?
Qiu Da is walking on the opposite side of the street to buy beer to drown his sorrows.
Qiu Da (repeatedly sighing then happened to overhear the Sexies conversation)
Qiu Da: 什么! How can that stupid fool ruin my whole life? Just because one mistake… one tiny mistake by my Dad!!!!!
(Walks to the Sexies and confronts them)
Qiu Da (Grabbing them by their well-maintained arms): IS that true, James bribed the referee to prevent me from scoring?!
Deborah (roll her eyes): Oh please! It’s no big deal, football player.
Sexy Lucy (curl her hair with one finger): Besides, your father murdered his mother, he didn’t kill anyone!
(Pause)
Sexy Lucy (stare at him with soft eyes and a syrupy tones): Anyway, if you want the truth, go meet them at (whispers something) 9pm.

Scene 4 Part 2
(at night at the secluded corner of the park at 9pm)
(James is passing over the money)
James: Good job, uncle Tommy
Referee Tommy: Of course! How can I not help my sister’s darling son! After what had happened… (sheds a sad tear)
James (looks away uncomfortably): Hmmph.
(Uncomfortable silence hangs in the air)
Qiu Da bursts in with an exploded roar.
Qiu Da (angrily): You!!!! Two of you!!! You robbed me of my dreams, my future, my everything…! Just because of what happened a long time ago…
James (glances up at him stonily): You. Killed. My. Mother.
Qiu Da (retaliates defensively): I’m sorry, but it wasn’t my fault…
Qiu Da (bents his head and continues solemnly): After your mother’s death… My father suddenly fell ill…. On his death bed, he mentioned your mother… and said he was sorry to have caused you such agony…..
James (gulit, anger, everything all pent up in one scream): Aaaahhhh (drop onto the floor).
(Blackout when James screams)

Jiayou! Oh. I am Coach Guo Da, not Boliao! =D